My Mum, she is Caring, loving, helpful, respectful, Hard Working.
My mum is so Caring. She loves helping others by giving them spare clothes we have, they are old clothes but the people she gives them to are very thankful for them.
My mum is also very hardworking, she wakes up at 5:30 in the morning to go to work and earn money for me and my sister. My mum is also cleaning the house every day because my sister keeps messing it up and it makes my mum sad and angry because then she finishes work and she's very tired but she still forces herself to clean up.
My mum is also very loving, just like my dad. My mum buys so many things for my older sister, also very expensive I always feel bad for my mum for buying expensive stuff for my sister so then I don't really ask her to buy me anything because I don't actually need stuff
My Dad, he is Helpful, caring, loving, responsible, Hardworking.
My dad is very hardworking as well. He wakes up earlier than my mum which is at 4:30 and he also does a lot of exercise at home because after work he has to always carry my little brother and it makes my dad's back hurt, also because my little brother is getting heavier and heavier.
He is also very helpful, my dad is always helping with giving away old things like small coffee tables, cups, plates, and more things for people to take. He doesn't make a price for it, my dad gives them away for free, dad also helps my grandma with gardening and hanging up the clothes to dry for the next day.
My dad is also super loving, he takes me and my 3 siblings places that we’ve never been and buys us 3 lots of things, things that are not too expensive.
Well done. You have used the 4 E's to add interesting detail. Nice patragraphs.
ReplyDeleteI have learnt alot about your mum and your dad.