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I rush into the huge building aiming for the shop I need to go to before it closes. Staring at the pack of chips that I could see from the clear door. I had to get the chips before anyone else could! But there was something else that I needed. I had to get the last pack of chips but as soon as I moved one leg.. I could feel something tap my right shoulder.
I had turned around to see a man with black shoes, black clothing, and black sunglasses. He was kind of bald but with a little bit of hair. The first thing I thought of a security guard when I looked at the man. Then I heard a voice saying “The shop is closed” I wish I could've gone into the shop but it was too late.
I jumped back into the car and heard the whole mall shut down. I could smell something delicious. Something delicious that made my mouth water. I got back out of the car and walked over to the place that smelt delicious. And ordered those delicious-looking smiley face fries. My mouth watered so much more after holding it up to my face ready to eat it. I put the fries in my mouth and I could taste that warm and salty fry.
love it angeleen
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DeleteThe Learning Intention was sharing as many of the senses as we can. You have included a few of the senses as you describe the shopping experience. I love the security guard paragraph. Nice.
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