Dear Carla.
I am very sorry I didn't show up at your office to help you move all your belongings. I was just so angry that you had to leave! I did want to come but.. I wanted to get a haircut. I changed my mind and told my mum to drop me off at school.. But Mrs Ebbell kept stopping me from getting inside.
I still managed to get inside then I.. Went inside your office and everything was empty and you weren't there. I saw your letter on your desk. I picked the letter up and walked out the door with my mum, she drove me home and I remembered it was colleen’s birthday party!
I remembered you said to give her something from my heart and something that I liked. So I put the book “My parents stole the elephant.” I put strings all over it and started getting nervous. I changed 6 times! I didn't know what to wear and I started screaming alot telling my mum that the present needs a bow!
Silly me, I didn't have to have a bow on the present. My stupid sister said I have to keep this party hat on, I was asking her if the hat was on staright but she just kept laughing at me, I just knew I wouldve just looked stupid it was so uncomfortable so I wanted to take it off.
When I arrived at Colleen's house WITH jeff, I was nervous but jeff rang the doorbell, the girls were screaming I just forgot how to sing happy birthday, I sang it all wrong I was so silly I was the only one singing, everyone started laughing at me. I felt like I was gonna cry but I didn't. I just started tearing up a bit.
After a while we all went to Colleen’s backyard and played some fun games, we played relays, everytime a person from any team won they would earn 2 points! And you know what! My team won with the most points, and I was the one with the post points!! We all got to choose something special from Colleen’s Mums special box!
I didn't think I would come first place, and make my team win. I just couldn't believe it! From Colleen’s Mums box I thought there would be some cool boy things.. The box was full of girly girl things.. I didnt wanna be rude so I just chose a Black headband.
Once everyone was done choosing on what they were gonna get from the box, we went outside again and played another game. This time, Jeff was in my team! We partnered up and started the race. The race was about tying our legs with a partner together and trying to get to the tree. It was WAY harder than I expected, and ofcourse, me and Jeff came 3rd place.
Please reply to this letter as soon as possible Carla
-Bradly
Tuesday, 30 March 2021
Dear Carla
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I love your letter to Carla. You have lots of text to text connections. You have made it fun and you sound like Bradley. You are also using paragraphs. Nice.
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