(date 24/7) Fairies
One day a girl named Blair woke up. She had a dream of Green Purple and Pink colored fairies. Blair thought it wasn't a dream. It was already time for her to go school but something was like stopping her from waking up. It was like she was mind-controlled!!
It felt like the fairies mind-controlled her and stopped her from getting up
Blair's parents were worried, they were sitting on Blair's bed thinking she died!
Blair's dad's plan was to get water and sprinkled it on her face,
“It worked!” Blair’s dad said excitedly
“H-huh? What happened, And mum why are you crying.?” Blair said.
“Hun we thought you died or something! we were trying to wake you up but you weren't getting up!”
Says mum in a sobbing voice
“Oh! Well guess what I had a dream about!” said Blair excitedly
“What was it about!?” said mum and dad.
“It was about these 3 fairies colored pink, green, and purple!”
“Wow, what were the fairies doing?”
Said, mum
“Uhh, they were kind of telling me not to wake up and just keep sleeping!” said Blair
“W-what heh n-nice dream..” said dad in a weird voice
“Yeah! Also is Saturday today?” asked Blair
“Uhh no... it's actually Friday today, but you weren't waking up so you missed out on school..” Says mum
“WHAT! NO. TODAY WAS SUPPOSED TO BE THE LAST DAY OF SCHOOL! I CANT SAY BYE TO ALL MY FRIENDS AND TEACHERS NOW.!” shouts Blair in anger
“yes yes, we know... But! You can email them!” said mum
“Yeah… I guess..” said Blair sadly
“C'mon! Let's eat pancakes and brownies for breakfast today” said dad happily.
“Yayy! I love Pancakes and Brownies!” said Blair happily.
Interesting story. I like the way you are setting out dialogue correctly with only one person on each line, and using speech marks.
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