The Day things started to disappear
One Day I was cleaning my house. I was
looking around to find some dusty spots. Then.. I noticed that my window was cracked a little. I went up to the window and touched the glass to see if anything would fall out. Nothing came out of the window so I just left it alone
(Next Day)
I woke up and went to brush my teeth. I was really hungry, so I decided to go and eat something from a cafe. I put on my coat and was ready to go. As soon as I was about to walk out the door I noticed that the glass that was cracked yesterday cracked even more.. I thought it was just the wind so if it got worse I'd have to replace the window.
I left the house and drove to the cafe. I was thinking about how the window cracked a lot from the past 2 days.
(coming back home)
I walked into the house and saw that a few things of mine were missing. It was really strange and I was really really scared.. I walked slowly and quietly into my room. The door was closed.. and I knew that before I left the house it was still open. I twisted the door handle and opened the door quietly. From what I saw peeking through the little gap was a really tall man wearing all black.. And that's when I knew that someone had been stealing things from my house..
I love your story, Angeleen. Great sentences and word choices. I think the ending was a bit of a let down. You don't sound scared at all at the end, even though you've just ddiscovered a strange man inside your house. I'd be freaked.
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